Friday, November 13, 2009

Alert

I just realized that to make my story work, I'm going to have to contort the timeline! So, it's either going to be fun to read because it will be kind of tricky, or it's going to be impossible to understand because it's so confusing!

*edit*
Oh wait, I just thought of a way to fix the problem without making it so confusing, nevermind.

This is just a warning.

Here is a sentence I wrote last night:

“I never finished my coffee,” said Gil, standing and twisting his body in an attempt to stretch despite his restraints. “Can I get some coffee?”

2 comments:

  1. So is that a yes or a no for time travel?

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  2. it wouldn't have been time travel, rather a few parallel story threads occurring at different times and converging in the end. no both ways?

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