Monday, November 30, 2009
22,804 words, FAIL
“That was dangerous,” said the truck. “Catch fields are made for low-velocity runaways, not for high-velocity low-mass vehicles. The occupants are injured.”
Venn nodded. “Not severely. They will recover. Continue following my instructions.”
The truck approached a flying junction, taking the lower track, descending into the third underspace level. Soon the tunnel bifurcated again, and then again, the truck bearing left each time. Ahead, another flying junction – this time the lower track was blocked by a closed gate. The truck slowed to a stop a dozen meters away.
71,691 words!!! (Okay actually 8000 for Nov. 09)
Even for Fall, the early evening air was almost too cold as the breath of the pending storm broke against the black onyx tower standing high above the rolling plains below. The tower was so tall that it seemed to preside over the whole field of ripened havala plants tucked in the tower’s shadow. Each plant’s fully peeled back husk revealed a midnight blue kernel shining and sucking the energy of the crimson lunar eclipse above. Clouds blanketed the majority of the night sky except for where they passed around an great invisible circle overhead that allowed the moon’s luminescence to shower through the otherwise cloud filled sky.
A tall man, almost dangerously thin, stood at the top, near tower’s edge, soaking in his creation. Almost every plant was in bloom in the field below. It was like thousands of blue eyes staring in worship from below the tower. The havala’s were ripe and that meant that it was only a matter of time before everything was his; before he could chant the final incantation and seal the spell with the sacrifice of blood.
Sunday, November 22, 2009
Michael A. Day 22 - 36,819
On a side not, I have 14k words to go, but I think I'm roughly halfway through the story that's developing. I can't tell if my pacing is slow, or my intentions have grown...
Felix tried the large brass door knob. “Locked,” he announced, and moved to peer into one of the grimy front windows. With his sleeve, he rubbed away dirt, leaving a clear porthole in the glass through which he could see an expanse of hardwood floor and the edge of a rug. The dim shapes of furniture crouched in the gloom beyond like artifacts in an undisturbed tomb.
“This is a might creepy,” Clarence said. “I don’t care for houses so quiet.”
Alexa was on the porch, moving with ease over the creaking boards. “Let me open the door for you,” she said brightly.
“Can you pick locks or something?” Felix asked, impressed.
“Of course,” she answered, and heaved a brick through one of the front windows.
The shattering glass tore at the quiet forest, thunderous and final; silence rushed in as the stunned birds fell mute, and then the noises of the forest returned; within a moment it was as if nothing had occurred.
Alexa stood, hands on her hips, looking quite pleased at the gaping window. “Lock pick,” she smiled, then frowned. “However, I’m sorry to report that I do not climb through dangerous-looking broken windows.”
Saturday, November 21, 2009
I do not think I can win this contest, unless I write more than 3000 words per day from now on, which I don't think I can do! But this is fun!
“Stop,” said Wili. The truck stopped, Wili opened the right-hand door and hopped out. He approached one of the potentially accessible doors and touched its com panel. There was no response. He touched it again, pressing hard against the panel surface. Nothing. He walked across the track to the other door. As he did so, he noticed something in the distance, in the tunnel ahead of the magtruck, colors standing out against the dim concrete and metallic grays of the tunnel and station. He opened his eyes wider, and it was as he had hoped: another patch of painted symbols and characters. He ran to it. It was poorly lit, being a dozen meters from the lights of the magtruck, but as he stood just a meter away he could read it clearly through all the grime and cobwebs and dust: “Access Station 8-64, Medna 15 km, Tug Day, Fivemonth 5, 837,” and then, “BURY THE GUNS, SINK THE SHIPS, OPEN THE CITIES.”
Wili repeated the final lines under his breath. A Mountain Hero song, an especially heroic and portentous one, was playing across his mind, and he began to hum along. He skipped back to the magtruck and climbed inside. He pulled the door shut. “Keep going,” he said.
The magtruck slipped forward, away from station 8-64.
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Michael A. Day 17 - 28,498
Friday, November 13, 2009
Alert
*edit*
Oh wait, I just thought of a way to fix the problem without making it so confusing, nevermind.
This is just a warning.
Here is a sentence I wrote last night:
“I never finished my coffee,” said Gil, standing and twisting his body in an attempt to stretch despite his restraints. “Can I get some coffee?”
Thursday, November 12, 2009
Michael A. Day 12 - 21,202
"The Scarlet Letter is a book about a crazy man who writes the alphabet every day, and every day one of the letters turns red, and he doesn't know why," began Susan Eck's answer.
"Hester Prynne's scarlet A symbolized her membership in the Avengers," wrote Clarence Dobbs, the big kid who always wore overalls and carried his books in a grocery bag.
When Felix's quiz was handed back to him, he stared at it in wonder. He hadn't read the book, but his answer made him look like a psychotic moron. "The Scarlet Letter is about a young actress name Scarlet, who is so awesome she wears the letter A on her shirt. She is killed near the end of the book by a pack of dogs controlled by an evil priest, who happens to be a failed film critic and a master of animal hypnotism."
Alexa thumped her head dully on the desk, embarrassed that a teacher had read her test. "Scarlet, a plucky teenage scientist, invents her own letter. The letter comes after Z and is shaped like a cross between an R and a D and is pronounced with a sound similar to a frog choking on a sunflower seed. Scarlet's letter has magical powers."
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
Maggie: Imagine it, 16189 words of this high quality
But it did seem much bigger than a butterfly. She remembered that it had definitely been bigger than the tree’s bellybutton, and that had been bigger than her palm. Standing in her living room, behind the piano, she was at least ten or fifteen feet away from both the tree and the fluttering. It looked like it had several sets of wings, and now she thought that it was probably three times the size of the bellybutton.
Suddenly, she froze as whatever the fluttering was froze by the tree. Without the fanning action of its wings, it almost disappeared in the darkness. Claudia had moved even closer to the window, leaning over the upright piano precariously up on her tiptoes with her hands keeping her balance on the top. She had squinted and moved even closer to the window until her nose had almost been touching it. Still, she hadn’t been able to see the fluttering at all.
She’d thought for a moment that it had gone away just like it had the morning before. And she had glanced longingly to her right and to the stairs up to her bedroom. Giving up, she’d turned one last time to the tree with her nose by this time pressing up against the window. And it had been then that the fluttering had swooped towards her.
It had come towards her so fast that she’d lost her balance jumping away from the window in shock. The fluttering had swooped to the window without pausing and then away again, past the big tree.
Claudia had remained standing in the middle of the living room for another fifteen minutes, still staring out the front window until her father had shuffled back in.
‘Claudia, why are the lights still on? You’re hard enough to get up in the morning. Give your mom and me a break and go to bed.’ He’d walked over to the front door and had turned off the porch light and the living room light, leaving them both in darkness.
Tuesday, November 10, 2009
Michael A. Day 10 - 17,394
But that wasn't possible, was it?
Always shrewd and methodical, Milo repeated the same experiments using his father's telescoping metal ladder in place of the rickety wooden one. Nothing happened.
Murf, Day 10, <9000 words... and we begin to slide downward...
Sunday, November 8, 2009
Bit of Chapter One
Timothy walked back and sat down next to his single-booted friend as he began to rave.
“How can I, who has served all three kings in this land, go serve some petty noble man and his pitiful little castle in some remote area?” Felix said as he gave no time for Timothy to answer his question. “Most country nobles have a least three wives or at best one wife, another mistress and a cousin. How am I to entertain anybody when it is sex, sex and more ugly sex with these country nobles? I certainly don’t want to watch those ghastly encounters! Ugh! No one but their kids will want to watch my juggling unless it is with flaming torches. Do you know I have burned my bell hat more than once with the fire? The fire is one of my finales, not the middle of the show! But fire is all they want. Burn those little—”
“Felix!”
The Jester shrugged and continued, “And the constant monster hunts are so dreadful when you are in the remote regions.”
“Monster hunts are mostly for protection so you don’t have to draw a blade and realize that you should have spent precious guild credits on learning how to use one,” Timothy said.
“Ha, I know more than you think,” Felix said as he winked at Timothy. “I always have an ace in the hole when it comes to protection against assination. Recall that I worked for all three kingdoms, my good Sub-Knight.”
“Well, when the time comes I hope that your ace in the hole is more than a cheat in cards. By the way, I have only known two nobles who openly had more than one woman in his court. It is the exception and not the rule.”
“If it isn’t in the open, it is on the side. That is where you will be getting yours from now on.”
“I am in love. I don’t want any on the side. Dammit! I wish I could have seen her, explained what is going on,” Timothy said as he pounded his fist into the palm of his gauntlets—a fusion of soft worked leather and steel backing. “I hope this isn’t the last time. Felix, I may never see her again.”
Felix ignored the emotional plea of his friend and slapped him on the arm. “On the side. On the sly. Slippery and divide. That should be your path, noble sir.”
Saturday, November 7, 2009
Michael A. Day 7 - 12,603
He barely had time to register what was happening. As he pulled the door open, he saw a long, stiff cord trailing from the inner doorknob to the top of a huge gilt mirror sitting on an easel in the middle of the room beyond. It was too late to stop what was happening--as the door swung open the cord yanked the mirror forward, toppling it from its perch on the easel. The mirror pitched forward in slow motion and seemed to hang in the air for a moment before plunging abruptly to the plank word floor and exploding into a thousand shards, projecting tiny glass missiles into the air around it--slivers of glass shot across the floor and bounced off of Felix and Alexa's shoes.
Silence crashed in around Felix in the wake of the shattering of the mirror. Seven years of bad luck. Seven years. Realizing he was holding his breath, he exhaled and stared blankly at the shards, which were everywhere. It must have been the biggest mirror Felix had ever seen. Or the one with the most glass, anyway. He couldn't believe how much there was.
"No one is ever going to be able to walk barefoot up here again," Alexa remarked.
Friday, November 6, 2009
Murf: Day 6: 7100 words
Thursday, November 5, 2009
my first robot attack! 7841 words, but i started early!
In a flash, Venn flew the few meters to Bede’s position. The surprised peacemen stepped back and then tried to hold their ground, expecting an assault from the fearsome and stately form of the Chief Librarian. Instead, the decrepit and damaged Bede slung around, his arms striking out and crushing the two zapsticks. In the same motion, he gripped the peacemen by their uniforms, lifted the men off the ground, and tossed them back into the portal. Venn quickly followed them in. Bede remained motionless in his battle stance.
“Gentlemen, you are in mutiny against the City of Medna. Your identities will be recorded for future reference,” said Venn in an authoritative voice. “Restrain yourselves, and the severity of this incident will be reduced.”
Wednesday, November 4, 2009
Murf: Day 4: 5300 words
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Murf: Day 3: 4710 words
Michael A. Day 3 - 7184
Monday, November 2, 2009
Murf: Day 2: 3521 words
Michael A: Day 2 - 5110 words
"Hold onto your britches, I'm coming," she drawled in her slow, Southern mountain accent. She sidled up to the other side of the counter and sat her coffee cup down unceremoniously. Liquid sloshed onto the sign-in sheet. She said nothing and stared blankly at Felix.
A clock on the wall of the office ticked out an account of passing time.
"You the Hutchinson's new boy?" she asked at last, apparently deciding she knew Felix.
He shook his head, wondering who the Hutchinsons were and why they would have a new high school freshman. "I'm Felix Ferguson. I'm new."
The woman tapped a huge fake purple fingernail on the counter, in time with the clock. "You kin to the little devil kid in here not ten minutes ago?"
"Glenn?" Felix asked. "Glenn Ferguson? He's my little brother."
She nodded one slow, deliberate nod and ticked off six more fake purple seconds. "You a trouble maker like that one?"
"No, no, no. Not at all," Felix replied hastily.
Tick, tick, tick, tick.
"I'll keep an eye on you two," she said at last, and tapped her glass eye with one purple nail. It clicked against the eye dully.
this is probably part of like chapter 7 or something but i haven't written lots of earlier parts yet!
"You really haven't studied this in school? Your parent's haven't taught you?" Wili shrugged. Zunzhen shrugged back. “I always thought this was the greatest story ever told. The Tug came three times, at the beginning, bringing settlers and supplies. It was supposed to come on a circuit, every couple of years, bringing new people, and news of Earth and the other worlds.” He smiled, and laughed. “The third time was the last – there’s been no Tug, and no more Earthlings, since then.”
Wili wondered when this could have been taught in class, and how he could have missed it. He was sure the Earthlings must have had fantastic robots. “Why not?” he asked.
Zunzhen walked away from the mural, back to the station entrance, and motioned up the stairs. “Who knows? It’s the greatest mystery of human history, as far as Acan is concerned. We’ll find out someday. We’ll go back, and find out what happened – once we build a Tug of our own. Another thousand years, maybe.” He started to climb the stairs, leaving Wili behind him in the darkness of the station. “Let’s go, kid. I’m late for a meeting.”
Maggie: First Try (1692 words)
When he asked her how she was doing, she’d actually made a small yelping noise and jumped a little. The jump had dislodged the panties from her thigh and had begun to slide down her leg. Tony asked her something, but Sophie couldn’t quite remember what it was. She was too focused on her panties sliding so slowly down towards her knee. She remembered being relieved that she’d worn her long blue jeans, but still was nervous that the panties might fall past her shin and straight onto the floor. ‘What panties were they?!’
She and Tony were standing by her locker in the middle of the busy hallway where the other teens were changing classrooms. Tony said something else and Sophie mindlessly mumbled back. If her cheeks had been flaming red minutes before, that was nothing to the color of her ears now. She shook her short hair out from behind her ears and leaned her face further forward. She was now able to see the bulge in her pants leg rather than just feel it. ‘Oh please god,’ she thought, ‘Please don’t let these be the underwear with the cartoon characters on them.’
Sunday, November 1, 2009
Murf: Day 1: 1812 words
Michael A: Day 1, ~2400 words
Felix always had salt on his shoulder. He was certain his family thought he was a loon, walking around with salty shoulders. Felix’s brother Glenn sometimes rubbed the odd French fry or onion ring on Felix’s shoulder and say, “sorry, I didn't get enough salt.” No matter how many times Glenn did it, it never seemed to get old. Glenn would howl with laughter and their parents would chuckle, or double over laughing, depending on whether or not they were drinking. Felix just grumbled and dusted off his shoulders.